The concept for your project is very interesting. The gradual visual break up of the plane is well articulated in the shadows. In the layout, the supporting images to the larger image seem to somewhat float in places. In the left bottom corner they are strongly anchored because the object in the frames defines the edges of the frames. In the others the objects are seen from a further distance so the frames are eroded and the layout loses some of its strength. The inspirational images are great but they are very bold because they are more colorful. It might be better to make them smaller. I think the general configuration works well and the idea of the main frame in addition to being bigger, framed at a different angle and very different view makes it very strong.
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The concept for your project is very interesting. The gradual visual break up of the plane is well articulated in the shadows. In the layout, the supporting images to the larger image seem to somewhat float in places. In the left bottom corner they are strongly anchored because the object in the frames defines the edges of the frames. In the others the objects are seen from a further distance so the frames are eroded and the layout loses some of its strength. The inspirational images are great but they are very bold because they are more colorful. It might be better to make them smaller. I think the general configuration works well and the idea of the main frame in addition to being bigger, framed at a different angle and very different view makes it very strong.
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